First Draft

The first draft was different, comparing to our final thriller. Unfortunately, the first draft of our thriller opening has been deleted and was not uploaded. But the things that we have done for our thriller in which are different from our final was the main item that we have used, instead of making it into a cliche, we have decided to omit the use of the mints, in which we have used as narcotics, and had then replaced it with a cartridge, to change it and to make it more interesting, The other thing was that the walking segment was more longer than the final, in which had made it more of a tedious scene, so in order to make it more appealing, we have shortened it to avoid dragging it out, along with that, when the main character was walking, he was walking towards the jewellery store, in which now, he was walking to the access to a parking, and then had looked around mysteriously.